On 8 December 2010 at Nakhonpathom Rajabhat University had a International Day.In this event had a lot of booths from many countries such as U.S.A. booth, England booth, China booth and etc. Those booths were made by professors on Nakhonpathom Rajabhat University. There are special thing in this event is a performance from English major's students.
There are my two impressions about The International Day. First thing, In the Ellis booth I try to test Ellis program again after I tested it at English Language Center. First time I got level 7 vocabulary test but in the second time at Ellis booth on International Day, I got level 9 vocabulary test. I'm very happy and impress about this test. After I was finished test, I was received a privilege to picked the random gift. There was FLASH DRIVE 4 GB from the random gift which I really want to have it's mine. After I random gift and then the result is a CANDY!!!.
Oh!! No!! I don't want it CANDY!!!!. Second thing, I impress with my friends which they co-working intently. Maprang, she is my class mate which I most impress because her and me must to Mr.&Mrs.International contest. But, I can't contest with her because I don't have a shirt for contest. I'm very sad with I was wrong. Maprang doesn't give up which I'm impress her very much.
In my opinion I think in this International Day is very fun, exciting and the important thing is every one who join this event can received knowledge from this event. I wish International Day will be organize again next year and forever.
-In the first,it's veary formal.
ตอบลบ-About mr.& ms. international, I thing that T sad more than you sure!!!!
-I don't know about grammer but I understood you.
Hey Bro!.There are many faults on your article.First,When you telling about the past,you have to use past tense.
ตอบลบSecond,you was wrong in preposition word.
Third,"I'm very sad with I was wrong" It'd better changed to be "I was very sad with my fault".
Finally,It's my advice.You would better write in a short sentence and cut some words off.Then you short will be a right sentence .
Dear Madew,
ตอบลบNow we are friends here. For the International Day, I had to say "Bravo!" with you because I was one of the competitors to test Ellis sound twist. But when I had got the lotto, I had only a candy. So sad I was!
Anyway, about your writing, like Prathuay, I think you should cut the sentences shorter to control your writing easier.
In addition, there are some mistakes in your task. For example, "On 8 December 2010 at Nakhonpathom Rajabhat University had a International Day." should be "On 8 December 2010 at Nakhonpathom Rajabhat University it was arranged the International Day."
"In this event had a lot of booths from many countries such as U.S.A. booth, England booth, China booth and etc." should be "In this event there were a lot of booths from many countries such as U.S.A. booth, England booth, China booth and etc."
Try harder in your writing and you will succeed in.
Hi,MaDew
ตอบลบI think you must use past tense in this article.
Your text is quite good.
See you when we see somewhere.
Wow!...wonderful...a long message!
ตอบลบHi MaDew. I think same P'Nutt.
Hi, Dewy
ตอบลบYour impression is so good.But,I don't understood you why you didn't attend the Mr.&Ms. Inthrnational Day contest. However, I know that you were happy on that day, weren't you?
Me again na.Where is your article about Herbie ?
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